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Take language processing, for example. We used to think that the right brain handled that (along with other various "creative" tasks), while the left brain handled math (or other more "logical" tasks). Federmeier's research through the Neurosciences Program and The Beckman Institute for Advanced Science and Technology shows that BOTH the left and right side of the brain are involved with language. So when someone is talking you, your left brain is anticipating what's coming next and actively trying to predict meanings. The right brain is also actively engaged, only its neurons are working on retention tasks. It's like your brain's little secretary jotting down the important stuff you'll want to recall from the conversation.
Essentially, neuroscience is finding that the brain breaks up big tasks into bite-size pieces and both hemispheres share the many tasks involved. Like a couple sharing the household chores! One washes the dishes, the other one dries. One sweeps the floor, the other one mops.
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| "A Distraction from Chores" by Auguste Serrure. Image PD. |
Evidently, this is what naturally works best for our brains. It's what the brain is already doing! In Part 1, I talked about how imagination impacts neurology. Imagining yourself playing the piano or practicing a sport stimulates and develops the neurons almost as if you were actually physically practicing. Thus, to be more effective and productive, writers need to stop imagining their two brains (the editor brain and the creator brain) at war. In Pt. 2, I explored how writers can break up the monumental task of writing a novel into more manageable pieces. Not only that, but how to break it up into tasks that allow both hemispheres of the brain to participate as a unified team: how to revise while writing, how to edit while creating!
This time, I want to cover the next bite-sized bit in my radical approach to the writing process: Gathering Sources.
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| Yes, this is a tower of books! Beautiful, eh? Photo by Aleksander Razumny. Image CC. |
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| An inside view of the tower. Photo by Mar.tin. Image CC. |
Gathering
sources is the time to journal wildly. Make character diagrams. Interview those
characters and creatures. Find out what they want most and what they most fear.
What they treasure and what they can’t stand. Explore your world. Draw maps of
your settings. Be your own best expert. Do any of the millions of writing exercises suggested in all those craft books you read.
You might
be tempted to think of this as the drafting stage of writing, but really, it’s what
my VCFA faculty mentor Julie Larios would call “playtime.”
AND, there’s a
plethora of research already out there underscoring the importance of play! (Curious? Check out Play: How it Shapes the Brain, Opens the Imagination, and Invigorates the Soul by Brown and Vaughn. Also, there's a great video from the Aspen Ideas Festival 2010, and a podcast worth your while!)
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| "Depths of Imagination" by JennaleeAuclair. |
So if
this is not drafting, then what is it? Well, to me, it’s the kind of writing
you should do throughout the whole of NaNoWriMo. It’s the kind of hot and fast
writing Stephen King refers to as “telling yourself the story” (On Writing). Here’s a snippet of my “gathering
sources” writing which I blazed through in the 2013 NaNo challenge.
WARNING:
What you are about to read is in its
roughest, toughest, most nascent forms. It came from a beat on a beat sheet and then from a summarized
scene on a scene card – two other
methods in the revise-before-you-write approach that I’ll talk about further
on. Yes, this scene will undergo future revision, but for now, this is how the
writing comes out when I forget all about being a writer and just focus on
telling myself the story.
WHAT
YOU NEED TO KNOW: This scene falls in the middle of book two in my Silk and
Venom series, a YA hard boiled urban fantasy that chronicles one teen’s
encounter with seretans. Seretans are the half-human, half-spider creatures
descended from Arachné – ya’ know, the woman tortured and transformed by
Greek gods. Humans are a seretan staple. They crave our bodily juices.
In my saga, seretans are poisoning smartphones with their venom in an effort to
make the surface of the earth their new kingdom and cafeteria. In this scene, the protagonist computer-hacker
Harker, is prepping for a journey. He and a few rebel seretans (Brash and others) have had to team
up in order to defeat "the big bad," but at this point, the team is not exactly
getting along.
Okay,
here we go:
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In the next scenes, I think it would be fun to have Harker
and Brash clash a little over what all Harker is packing. He’s got a huge
duffle bag full of crap. Brash points out that he won’t be able to carry and it’s full of stuff
he won’t need.
I do need all this! And it’s not that much, says Harker.
That duffle bag is bigger than you are, Brash retorts. Then
he sifts through it noting the multiple pairs of pants, undergarments, feet
coverings—
Those are called socks, Harker corrects.
And you can’t go a few days wearing the same…socks?! Brash
snorts. What happens to human feet if they do not wear clean socks every day?
Well, for one, they don’t grow weird hooky-things on their
toes.
Brash squeezes his feet self-consciously.
Yeah, Harker goads. That’s right. I saw those bad-boys when
you were bleeding to death on my dining room table.
My toe-claws are at least useful. Unlike your four sweaters—
Hey, I don’t know what the weather is gonna be like where
we’re going—
And your…comic books.
Brash spreads out the full series of Destin Espoir and he is
immediately reduced to gleeful mush when he sees there are so many to be read.
“There is more than one?”
Harker snorts. Chuh! There are 262, not counting the
spin-off series.
I had no idea, Brash says. I had this one (he indicates the
series opener).
Brash thumbs through the second in the series. He remarks
that he thought the first one ended on an unreasonable cliffhanger. Stopping
mid-action like that. Ridiculous! But now he sees why.
Harker nabs the comic book and makes a remark about maybe
Brash can check them out when they get back—since none of these can come along
now.
Brash relents that maybe they should bring a few,
considering the long drive and back. They seem on even
ground for a just a moment. Brash picks through Harker’s packing supplies and
says he should put those in something he can carry on his back.
Brash even goes so far as to twist it all in Harker’s bed
sheet and tie it around Harker’s body. He displays how all of his possessions
are on him in the same way.
That is how a Warrior packs, he says. Harker admires the
compact approach.
Harker looks in the mirror and realizes he
looks like an idiot. Madda even cruises by the room to ask about more sleeping bags
(should they send someone out to go buy some?) and she laughs pretty good when
she sees the twisted sheet tied around Harker's torso.
Harker thanks Brash, but then dumps out his backpack and
says he’ll stick with how humans pack.
As Harker struggles with the knot, Brash goes to the window
and checks their surroundings. He glimpses Sophie in her room, spying on them,
but she’s gone so fast he’s not entirely sure.
He mentions it to Harker who says, “Oh that’s my good
friend, Sophie. She’s not spying, she’s just really shy. You can wave at her if
you want. But you gotta’ do it human-style.”
How’s that, Brash wonders.
With this finger up, Harker demonstrates. He makes a fist
and lifts only the middle finger.
That’s weird, Brash says.
Yeah well, that’s humanity for ya.
Brash waits until he sees Sophie again, and then he smiles
big and waves. The look on her face is not what he expected but she stops peeking through the window.
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That’s
it. No quotation marks and really not a whole lot of proper punctuation in
general. But who cares? The scene flowed fast and furious. It made me laugh out
loud because all of the sudden Harker tricked this bad-ass Warrior who inadvertently
flips the birdie to a nosy next door neighbor. THAT detail was NOT on
the beat sheet and it certainly was not on the scene card! It just happened. It
was an act of autonomy, a declaration of independence! An imaginary character that
I created basically asserted himself as unique, self-motivated, and independent
of my puppet strings.
And all
because I took the time to gather the source material on him. I let the two spheres of my brain work together, each one taking on a different aspect of the writing process. And all that miraculous neuroscience took place while I was basically playing around!
Playing
helps you better understand the people you will write about and the world they
live in. It also sparks your best critical thinking and problem solving (The Craft of Research, Booth et al, 30).
In other words, what seems like purely creative playtime is also an analytical
heyday for the brain. And if revision boils down to reconsidering ideas in
light of new evidence, then gathering sources is the time when you encounter a
lot of new evidence and will likely revise your story a lot.
But
never fear. All you risk changing at this point is a one-sentence logline
(refer back to Pt. 2).
Unfortunately,
you can’t gather sources indefinitely. You have to complete your novel some day.
So, set a deadline for your playtime and really focus and funnel your creative
and analytical efforts.
Now,
even though you may be tempted, do not jump in and start drafting—YET. I know
the pull back to your old two-brains-at-war habit will be strong. But trust me,
postpone drafting for later. Your Jekyll and Hyde have only just begun to get
along and work together through aiki. And besides, we have a lot more revision to
do. So, before you run off and write your story, go play and gather sources.
